Here is the start of my thumbnails for our Project Invisible Cities, Focusing on the city Armilla. One of the main thing which I though Armilla looked like was that this city of pipes, baths and taps were on a platform that overflowed over the edge and created a waterfall effect as he said it could be seen as enchanting like a teacup and saucer was overflowing. I feel like my lines could have been clearer so it is easier to see the thumbnails and what everything is.
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ReplyDeleteHi Grace,
ReplyDeleteSome good points covered here :)
You have a couple of spelling mistakes that make a big difference to your meaning... you have 'mortality' and 'immortality' instead of 'morality' and 'immorality'... a little 't' that makes all the difference between life and death! ;)