Here is the start of my thumbnails for our Project Invisible Cities, Focusing on the city Armilla. One of the main thing which I though Armilla looked like was that this city of pipes, baths and taps were on a platform that overflowed over the edge and created a waterfall effect as he said it could be seen as enchanting like a teacup and saucer was overflowing. I feel like my lines could have been clearer so it is easier to see the thumbnails and what everything is.
Hey Grace - congrats on getting to your final render. I don't know if you've got the time and resource to absorb a tweak or two...? If so, I think you need to look at that 'black triangle' of floor at the very front of the image; it looks a bit glitchy - as if something is missing from the image: I don't know if it's 'below' the patterned floor or 'above' it - it's hard to read spatially. I'm wondering too if the resolution of the pattern floor texture is sufficient as it looks a bit soft and blurry here?
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